Smile - preliminary task 1 rough edit

 


Teacher feedback:

  • sound bleed over black transition (more noticeable in 1st fade to black)
  • music in general --> another layer of tension to match action on screen
  • intensify the realisation that he is being followed (slow mo?)
  • shift in tone (music) for struggle scene --> editing - explore cutting shots together in different ways
  • sound to match the knife
  • sound FX at end
  • cool end title
  • better quality export

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